Revenge Sign-in System

The First Kill – The Beginning of Revenge

(Now enhanced with more graphic details and a victim POV shift.)

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The World Has Forgotten This Place

Most hospitals had a quiet hum of activity, a steady rhythm of footsteps, distant voices, and machinery beeping.

But this place?

This asylum was a graveyard for the living.

At night, the staff disappeared, leaving only the whispers of the patients.

Gerard sat in his hospital bed, eyes half-closed, listening. He had spent the past two nights observing. Watching. Learning.

The nurses walked in patterns, predictable. The security was sloppy.

The orderlies—the ones who force-fed him drugs—were arrogant, careless.

And most importantly, the doctor who planned to kill him never stayed late.

"That means they'll strike in the morning."

His fingers twitched.

Good.

That meant he had time to strike first.

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Testing the System – The First Sign-In Reward

[Ding! Daily Sign-In Complete.]

A soft chime echoed in his mind.

[Reward: "Executioner's Instinct" Activated.]

[Your perception of enemy weak points is now heightened. Your ability to predict movements has increased.]

The change was instant.

A new awareness settled into his mind, like slipping on night-vision goggles in complete darkness.

The air in the room felt sharper. The distant footsteps of the night staff were clearer.

And when he focused on the locked door across the room, he saw every weakness.

The guard outside walked past every 30 seconds.

The lock mechanism had a simple release—a small twist in just the right spot.

The nearest security camera was aimed too high—a blind spot right beneath it.

His first sign-in reward was already proving useful.

"I can use this."

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The First Test – A Minor Kill

He needed to confirm his ability to take a life in this body.

His first test subject?

One of the night orderlies—the one who had laughed while forcing pills down his throat.

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Orderly POV – Seconds Before Death

Luo Feng hated working nights.

The asylum was too quiet, too still when the sun went down.

The patients, especially the new ones, were the worst. They either screamed themselves to sleep or just sat there, staring at the walls, muttering to invisible ghosts.

Like that rich kid.

Li Xian had been quiet since waking up, but Luo knew the type. Soft. Broken. Easy to control.

He chuckled to himself. Maybe he'd up the dosage tomorrow, make the brat drool on himself.

But tonight? Tonight was just another night.

He strolled past the rooms, doing his rounds, when he heard it.

A whisper.

Luo turned, frowning. Room 37—Li Xian's room.

The whispering was faint, just under the threshold of hearing.

He smirked.

Finally breaking, huh?

Shaking his head, he unlocked the door, stepping inside.

"Couldn't sleep, kid?"

Silence.

Luo barely had time to register the movement.

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Back to Gerard's POV – The Kill

He moved fast, closing the distance in a second.

His hand shot out, grabbing the orderly by the throat.

The man's eyes went wide, mouth opening to scream—

Gerard squeezed.

The cartilage in his throat collapsed with a sickening crunch.

The scream never came.

Luo's arms flailed, hands clawing weakly at Gerard's wrist. His legs kicked, knocking against the hospital bed.

Gerard adjusted his grip, twisting.

The orderly's spine jerked unnaturally, his body convulsing once before going limp.

Still. Silent. Dead.

The body slid to the floor. A perfect, quiet execution.

Gerard exhaled.

"It feels… natural."

The system didn't just give him knowledge. It enhanced what was already there.

He looked down at the corpse.

One down.

Now, for the doctor.

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The First Major Kill – The Doctor's Execution

By morning, Gerard was no longer a patient.

He was a hunter in enemy territory.

The doctor who conspired to kill him arrived at his usual time, strolling in with a clipboard and a false smile.

"How are we feeling today, Li Xian?"

Gerard smiled back.

"Much better."

The doctor's smirk faded slightly, sensing something was off.

Too late.

Gerard had already moved.

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Doctor's POV – The Moment Before Death

Dr. Zhang prided himself on his calm professionalism.

Most of his patients were just names on a file—numbers to be adjusted, cases to be managed.

Li Xian was no different.

Or at least, he shouldn't have been.

So why did he feel… uneasy?

There was something wrong.

Li Xian's posture, his eyes, his tone—none of it matched his medical records.

Dr. Zhang swallowed, trying to shake the feeling. It didn't matter.

The boy was still a patient, locked in a facility he controlled.

No matter how strange he was acting, there was no danger here.

That was his last mistake.

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Back to Gerard's POV – The Kill

He lunged forward, one arm grabbing the doctor's throat, the other yanking him down by his collar.

The clipboard clattered to the floor.

Dr. Zhang gasped, choking, his hands grappling weakly at Gerard's wrist.

"Li Xian—"

"You signed my death certificate."

His voice was calm. Cold. Detached.

The doctor's eyes bulged, his lips trembling.

Gerard tightened his grip, shifting his hold slightly.

And then, he twisted.

A dry snap echoed in the empty room.

Dr. Zhang's body convulsed once, then slumped, lifeless.

Gerard released him, letting the corpse drop like trash.

His eyes drifted down to the clipboard. His own medical file.

At the bottom of the page, under the forged suicide report, he picked up a pen and wrote two simple words:

"I remember."

Then, he left the body behind.

By the time they found him, it would be too late.

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The System's Response

As he slipped back into his hospital bed, waiting for the chaos to begin, the system flickered again.

[Mission Complete: First Target Eliminated.]

[Bonus Reward: Stealth Skill Enhanced.]

Gerard's lips curled.

The system was rewarding him for every step forward.

And he was just getting started.

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